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Wednesday 15 December 2021

Summer poem(SLJ)-By Erich Wyne

 This poem is part of my song. Yes I write songs.  And sometimes I make my song into poem, isn't it fun!  

4 comments:

  1. Kia ora Erich!

    My name is Charlotte and I am from the Manaiakalani Summer Learning Journey team!

    What an amazing poem you have written! And you write songs?! How many songs have you written?

    Songs and poems are quite similar aren’t they? They both have a rhythm, they sometimes rhyme, and they tell a story!

    To get the points for the SLJ task, you have to either write down some words and their synonyms about summer, or you can do the ‘Step It Up’ task and write what you think makes a good slam poetry performance. Here is the link to the SLJ activity instructions!

    Awesome mahi, Erich! Have a go at those activities!

    Ngā mihi nui,
    Charlotte :)

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  2. Hi Erich, Really amazing poem. Keep up the good work.

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  3. Wow Erich , this poem / song is really good . Keep up the awesome work !!!

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  4. Kia Ora Erich

    This is a well written poem keep up the Good work.

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